The Story

Eden in Babylon is a new piece of musical theatre that focuses on a hypothetical movement to mobilize a group of intelligent young people who prefer to sleep outdoors.   For many, this preference is connected to a reverence for Nature; for others, to a penchant for pushing the human body past its limits; for still others, to a sense of adventure associated with hustling for a living on the urban city streets. 

Though the Kids (as they are called) are very focused and driven, and though they do their best to care for each other, they still feel directionless, and in a sense, lost.  This causes them to seek out a charismatic leader, and they find him in  Winston Greene.

Unlike the Kids, who mostly come from broken homes in an underprivileged class, Winston hails from a wealthy dynasty, where his parents have sheltered him throughout his life.  As the show begins, Winston breaks out of a forty day period of abstinence from all external influences.  As he bursts into view to announce his Enlightenment, he instead finds himself being hauled off  to a psychiatric facility.  It is there that he meets the Kids.  Like Buddha, who hailed from royalty and did not truly begin his spiritual journey until he first encountered the suffering of poverty, Winston is moved to join the Kids in their minimalistic lifestyle.  So he escapes from home shortly after his release from the psych ward, hooks up with the Kids, and learns the values and mores of outdoor living, in Nature, and on the streets. 

Winston’s parents are naturally concerned, so they file a Missing Persons Report, and hire an expensive search team to find him.  Meanwhile, Winston and the Kids elude those who are searching for him, moving from place to place, and adopting different disguises.  Eventually, Winston is caught, and his parents decide that he needs to go through the criminal justice system in order to learn his lesson.  This enrages the rest of the Kids, and they storm the gated community where Winston’s parents live, and vandalize the house where Winston was born.   Meanwhile, as rumor has it, Winston dies of multiple causes in the Santa Rosita County Jail. 

Because I intended to parallel the life of Buddha at the show’s beginning, and parallel the life of Christ toward the show’s end, Winston’s alleged death is an analogy for the crucifixion, where Jesus died for the sake of his followers, and the salvation of many to come.   But since I’ve already given away most of the story, it would pain me to let you know whether Winston is also “resurrected” in the end.  Suffice it to say that the show ends with an extremely happy ending, where a dramatic increase in communication between the Kids and the members of Winston’s birth community result in a decision to let the Kids live indefinitely in their homes, as long as they repair the damage.  

Because I am a person who has lived and worked comfortably among those in America’s upper middle class; and who has also functioned reasonably competently among those who hustle for survival on the streets, I consider the creation of this musical to be a spiritual calling of mine.  My personal opinion is that classism is the biggest problem we face in America today.  Not racism, sexism, or ableism — though they are all problematical enough.  That the “rich get richer and the poor get poorer” is almost an axiom of everyday living, and no doubt has been the case since the dawn of human history.   But never have I seen a Presidential cabinet composed largely of billionaires; and never have I seen so many homeless citizens scattered about the city streets, sleeping in cars, or hiding in forested areas, as I do today.   The middle class, in the meantime, has all but vanished.  Yet the Great Middle Class has long been the liaison, the mediator between the class extremes, the facilitator of positive communication and trust, between two disparate factors of our society. 

I have never seen more division in America than I see today.  Whatever happened to the koans of morale?  “A house divided against itself cannot stand.”  “United we stand; divided we fall.”  “A chain is only as strong as its weakest link.”   Let’s strengthen the weakest link in the chain of America, before that chain is broken beyond repair.  Let’s strengthen the Homeless People of the United States of America — before this great nation, of the people, by the people, and for the people, perishes from the Earth. 

Andy Pope
Eden in Babylon
Copyright © 2018





11 thoughts on “The Story

  1. “Eden in Babylon” sounds great, A.P. – interesting story for the world it creates and timely message for the world it addresses (that’s us). It may be because of my “Hippies” novel, which does some of the same visionary work, but my bias is to see it in part as a bridge from the’67 Haight to something new. And desperately needed. I agree with you that there has never been “more division in America than I see today. Whatever happened to the koans of morale? … ‘United we stand; divided we fall.’” That slogan is now anathema to both Trump conservatives and identity politics liberals. The moral ground has been ceded by all parties. Maybe with “Eden in Babylon” and “Hippies,” we can start a movement in the arts – outside of the political spectrum, left and right – and save the day! It’s a nice dream anyway.

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    • Absolutely in accord, Gary. The Left-Right chasm appears to have been consumed in a much more critical rift having to do with socio-economic class. Also, historically, the Arts have thrived at times of political turmoil. I suspect you and I are not alone in this vision, but we might as well network the movement while the iron we strike is hot. The national morale has sunken to such a new low, I actually encounter intelligent people these days who don’t even know what the word “morale” means. And as far as dreams are concerned, this nation was founded on one. What have we got to lose? Nothing, as near as I can tell. And we might just gain our country back.

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  2. The resolution of the story is a microcosmic view of what needs to happen macrocosmically! I particularly agree with the perspectives you share in the paragraph after the synopsis.

    Thank you for your interest in and comments on my blog.

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  3. I agree completely. There is no substitute for good live theatre. And I’m glad to hear the title drew you in. Hopefully that will help me in my submissions process, which as of yesterday (having completed a working script and demo) has at long last begun. All the best to you as well.


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